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WiseWomanWickedTongue's avatar

What a delight to read. I especially liked your commentary and art selection to support the poem. Bravo!

Rachael Raine Rivers's avatar

Aww, thanks for reading! 💜

Michelle AG's avatar

Awww. This is so cute, and what an introspective look at your child self. I love that young Rachael saw magic in the world. I feel like the Rachael of now is still finding magic.

Elizabeth Hagenlocher's avatar

Oh my gosh, this is too cute! Also, I'm impressed with your 11-y/o poetry! I was writing horribly angsty poetry at that age that will never see the light of day... maybe I'll share a story or two though ahaha

Rachael Raine Rivers's avatar

Oh, you should! I'd love to see that.